Like I commented in one of my updates, this reads like an adolescent's wet dream. No real style, no real plot, childish dialogues, cardboard characters...And I really really hate the way the author chooses to present D/s relationships. The sub is the laughing stock of the camp, the weirdo, a pathetic being who calls everyone willing to cause him pain "master". And the dom fucks the sub unconscious just because they can and the other person seems to enjoy it.No. More.
