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I'm a hopeful cynic.

Beyond Duty (Short story) - SJD Peterson 3.5 stars.I liked Gunny. I understood him, his hopes, his insecurities. I can't say the same about Mac but, from what I got through Gunny and by the way he Domed Gunny he came across like a caring partner.The mild BDSM session was fitting and well delivered. Very tender and emotional. I enjoyed being in Gunny's head in that scene. I believed him when he said Mac understood him, gave him exactly what he wanted, when he wanted it, how he wanted it.I had some minor issues with the use of tenses but they didn't draw me out of the story.All in all, I enjoyed this story and I wished it were longer; I caught myself wondering what happened next. But I guess that's a good thing, right?